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Offline Sunbird

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Stepping Softly
« on: May 01, 2009, 09:40:39 PM »
I think I wrote this last fall


I’ve gotten tired
Picking up the shattered scattered pieces
Trying to see a mental picture
Clearing my misty rose colored eyes
How long can I hold out a hand
Hoping you’ll take the first step
These one way conversations
Have hung up on the words
Intensions always meant for good
They echo an empty sound
My heart has gotten tired
Holding open the door
There’s nothing more that I can do
But walk softly across the broken floor
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Offline Jessa

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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #1 on: May 02, 2009, 03:40:24 AM »
that's beautiful, sunbird!
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Offline Rupes_darlin

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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2009, 10:57:11 PM »
awww great job
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Offline RGs_Gal

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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2009, 04:39:43 PM »
That's wonderful, Sunbird! Nice job! :)
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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2009, 12:06:46 AM »
 :glomp:  Beautiful as always my sister
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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 05:56:21 AM »
Ah yes, Sunbird, well done.  Although I don't express myself often, you need to know that you are in my thoughts often.   :)
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Offline Mamiekske

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Re: Stepping Softly
« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2010, 04:03:47 AM »
Great poem, I really like it.
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