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Offline Brian

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Desperation
« on: May 06, 2009, 02:04:51 PM »
And in the dungeon of his heart,
He crouched in shackles on the floor
And waited there, intent his stare,
Upon the opening in the door,
Through which his jailer once a day
Pushed crusts to which he'd wildly crawl,
Then rise to press his eager eye
Against a peephole in the wall.
Then all too soon, it closed... and gone
Were light and hope and love and all.
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Re: Desperation
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 02:54:52 PM »
wow!!
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Re: Desperation
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 09:31:51 AM »
i remember when you would once in a great great while post a poem.  that's a great poem budgie  ;D
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Re: Desperation
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2009, 09:48:43 PM »
Yearningly Powerful....nuff said.
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Offline Rupes_darlin

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Re: Desperation
« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2009, 10:56:37 PM »
wow that was amazing and sad
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Offline RGs_Gal

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Re: Desperation
« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2009, 04:41:02 PM »
I didn't know you write poetry, Brian! It's really nice. Hope to read more from you. :)
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Re: Desperation
« Reply #6 on: July 19, 2009, 12:04:40 AM »
Thats lovely brian
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Offline Mamiekske

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Re: Desperation
« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2010, 04:05:39 AM »
That's one little artwork you wrote there. I think it's very strong, please post some more great poems!
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